Jasmine Hart

Seamus Heaney Ann Dean Emily Bronte Langston Hughes and Patrick Kavanagh are all great. "Being Alive" and "Staying Alive" are great anthologies, published by Bloodaxe. They'd introduce you to a ...

April 12th Free Verse This Play *submitting* April 13th Petrarchan Sonnet Bring Back Pangaea *submitting*

This flows well.You have some great imagery here. I really love; "I’m a candle in a hurricane. " and "The smell of your skin lingers on me now." Personally, I ...

I enjoyed this. It flows well. I especially liked; "By clear skies liberty flies" and "a dream is burning..." and "anxiety sighs unlearning". I think that lines four and six ...

You use some very good imagery here. I especially loved; "it simmers at the bottom of our souls until it gets a chance to spread like a disease"- it was ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! You make some interesting points here, and I love how you consider all the different angles. As a whole, it flows well, with a clear beginning ...

This flows perfectly, and you build up nicely to an effective climax. I'd cut the "it"s before "perfect" and"damaged", as you don't really need them. The form is very good:the ...

Thank you so much Cal! You're very good for my self-esteem! April 11th Triolet One Two Three, One Two Three One two three, one two three, teach me to move ...

Yay, a sonnet! I love sonnets. If you're interested in them,there's a brilliant anthology called "No Bliss Like This", which is definitely worth a read. Your meter is perfect and ...

This is really interesting. I love how you put forward the horse's persona. It's also effective how you make the poem circular by linking the end to the beginning, and ...

I love this. It's very clever, and flows very well. It's also very original. Stanzas two and three were particularly witty, and the ending is very effective. I'm not sure ...

This flows well and the imagery is good. I especially like; "sour pills long fermenting in your sidestreet pockets", "Your hands flutter to stopper my thrashing veins, " and "splinted ...

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